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Friday, 28 September 2018

Jubilee moment in time

Name: Charis
Date: 17/9/18


Learning Goal:


We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the
photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our

audience (people who read our writing).




I heard excited voices around the church,

I saw father hiding his laugh when sunny magnificently sang his part,

I felt excited that we were going to perform with pride in our hearts,

I wondered if something would go wrong,

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